I’m walking farther into a mist
I could call a delicate jaded night
Sometimes it lifts a little
to reveal contours of rock structures
far away, only to become
jaded again as I trot along,
stepping into puddles,
trying to avoid the pitfalls
of the delicate jaded night
– Niebla ( © 2008 )
Written to involve delicate, jaded, night from 3WW. Three words that proved to go great with my l’arm moyant mood of late. Avoid that jaded night! Take out your flashlight.
I like this, as I’ve had those moods where you just try and avoid a jaded night. Nice job.
I love the last line. It wrapped it up perfectly.
Welcome to 3ww. I believe this is the first time I’ve read you. I can relate to your mood. Thanks for the read.