Three conditional lines for Liz

… wherever she may be

Had I spoken to you at that red pedestrian light after class
Had you not been so easily intimidated by the poetry pundits at CU
Had you been around when I drove to Crested Butte for another timid knock on the door of karma & fate

– Niebla ( © 2010 )

Written for The thing you didn’t choose, napowrimo #11.

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About niebla

I wish to remain clear of details. My words shall lift the veil.
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2 Responses to Three conditional lines for Liz

  1. J. D. says:

    Powerful and tight. Appreciate how it appears life can hinge on a very few single incidents. Nicely done.

  2. Robin says:

    “for another timid knock on the door of karma and fate…” – very nice!!! Well done.

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