Colorado River Valley Humingbird Recall

Tiny whirr as they were
feeding outside our Glenwood
Springs ranch-style motel

– Niebla ( © 2010 )

Written for ‘Hummingbirds’ at Haiku Bones.


About niebla

I wish to remain clear of details. My words shall lift the veil.
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7 Responses to Colorado River Valley Humingbird Recall

  1. KuyerJudd says:

    Oh, what great imagery your haiku has! I loved reading this.

  2. Short Poems says:

    Lovely, I enjoyed reading it 🙂

    marinela x

  3. Bruce Miller says:

    Great internal rhyme in first line, whirr/where. It puts me right there in that moment.

  4. Stan Ski says:

    Like the way you put sound into written words.

  5. shakira says:

    Very vivid Haiku.
    Mine is here

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