A weightless haiku

Ignore this fear, she
whispered in my ear, you’ll see
you will be weightless.

– Niebla ( © 2010 )

Written to involve fear, ignore, weightless from 3WW.


About niebla

I wish to remain clear of details. My words shall lift the veil.
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7 Responses to A weightless haiku

  1. ThomG says:

    light and airy.

  2. pia says:

    What every person wishes to hear 🙂 Extremely elegant hiaku

  3. Dee says:

    I would want that in writing please!

  4. Andy Sewina says:

    Love the philosophy and the succinct way you put it!

  5. pieceofpie says:

    it is a matter of closing one’s eyes… so simple so hard…so lovely this ku

  6. hames1977 says:

    weightless in a vacuum. a beauty in a standstill. time frozen. good impressions.

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