The naked rock haiku

rocks waiting. Plants will encroach,
cover nudity.

– Niebla ( © 2010 )

Based on genuine experience. Promise to take picture and post for illustration. Done:


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I wish to remain clear of details. My words shall lift the veil.
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5 Responses to The naked rock haiku

  1. pieceofpie says:

    it’s been a fair while since coming this way… that is so apropos… there is definitely something wildly kooky abt a prison of rocks… only man could make it appear so normal… great catch of one of those moments…

  2. Pacze Moj says:

    The first line is perfect. Not only gets the meaning, but the length of the word suggests the amount of the rocks. Encroaching plants: time, morality.


  3. hames1977 says:

    i like this haiku so much. i like the imagery and the analogy of it.

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