Rainy spring day haiku

For S.

Why do you straighten
them? I’d love to drown in them –
the waves of your hair.

– Niebla (© 2012)

Posted for Haiku Heights and waves.


About niebla

I wish to remain clear of details. My words shall lift the veil.
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8 Responses to Rainy spring day haiku

  1. Amazing! This is a lovely love haiku!
    Best, M.

  2. Ramesh Sood says:

    Very different and pretty romantic too… well done..

  3. elleceef says:

    This is so romantic. I love it 🙂

  4. Karen says:

    I agree, this is so romantic.

  5. becca givens says:

    Ahhh, the waves of hair … can be intoxicating!!

    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

  6. wordcoaster says:

    I was tangled in your words–lovely 🙂

  7. Pingback: Yes, Haiku Love You « wordcoaster

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