Rainy spring day haiku

Posted on April 5, 2012 by niebla

For S.

Why do you straighten
them? I’d love to drown in them –
the waves of your hair.

– Niebla (© 2012)

Posted for Haiku Heights and waves.

About niebla

I wish to remain clear of details. My words shall lift the veil.
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8 Responses to Rainy spring day haiku

  1. Mariya Koleva says:
    April 5, 2012 at 9:52 am

    Amazing! This is a lovely love haiku!
    Best, M.

    Reply
  2. Ramesh Sood says:
    April 5, 2012 at 11:51 am

    Very different and pretty romantic too… well done..

    Reply
  3. elleceef says:
    April 5, 2012 at 1:35 pm

    This is so romantic. I love it 🙂

    Reply
  4. Karen says:
    April 5, 2012 at 2:17 pm

    I agree, this is so romantic.

    Reply
  5. becca givens says:
    April 6, 2012 at 2:03 am

    Ahhh, the waves of hair … can be intoxicating!!

    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

    Reply
  6. wordcoaster says:
    April 8, 2012 at 7:35 pm

    I was tangled in your words–lovely 🙂

    Reply

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