Cut it away
Somebody cut away this desperate heart
– Jackson Browne, “Cut it away”
I say it’s complicated
While for all practical purposes
I’m single
And more alone than ever
Deep inside I know
That it could not be different
But that desperate heart
Keeps hanging on
Practical and heart
Don’t rhyme
– Niebla ( © 2010 )
Written upon inspiration by One Single Impression.
As much as I can understand right now, I think you’re right!
earnest and longing.
sometimes they do…
waking in to dreams
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Practical and heart
Don’t rhyme
^^Love those two lines…so powerful! Your poem was beautiful.
A deep feeling poem. Nicely done.
Your word evoke emotion and truism from the heart. Though where there is hope, there are also umlimited possibilities.
They don’t.
I know how you feel.
Thank you.
As long as there is life, there is hope, I think. This is a nicely crafted piece!
Yeah. Practical and heart are always at draggers drawn.
Thanks for putting that into words.
yes quite complicated!
single and lonely..
very different take.. thanks! 🙂